Monday, May 26, 2014

red poem

    red   as   a   door  
    red   as    a  mat
    red  as  paint
   red  as   a   wore
red   as   a   agre   borde
red   as   a    soke
red   as   a    rofe
red   as   a    flower
red as a fire
red   as  a   btow
red   as  a    jacket
red   as   red   wose
red   as  a   hat
red  as   a   tie
red   as   satese   sowte

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jono,
    Remember to get your work proof read by an adult before you publish it so that everyone can read your wonderful ideas. You have come up with lots of ideas of things that are red. I wonder if you could add some more detail and say red as (what type of flower). Or red as what type of hat a warm winter beanie?
    Great to see you adding to your blog.
    From Mrs Head

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